Riddle’s Hand Poem

Editor’s Note:
I do not know for certain if
This is an actual Riddle piece. The
Subject doesn’t fit. Why hands? But,
I did find this among his papers
After he died. By the markings on it,
I think he wasn’t quite
Finished with it.

III.

An extreme beauty.
I,
Would say?
Is found,
In the fingers,
Of age.

Withered –
Wasted by wear –
Arriving,
To the meaning
Of the matter.

IX.

Yes, details,
Dead, excesses,
Excised… and
What is left,
Is pure,
Is painful,
Is true –

A pair of hands,
Reflected,
A bar of chocolate,
Seen.

13 thoughts on “Riddle’s Hand Poem

  1. Björn Rudberg (brudberg) October 11, 2015 / 6:22 pm

    Oh I love that extreme beauty… there is something so special about old hands.. perhaps it’s the distance they have gone.

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  2. Kerry O'Connor October 11, 2015 / 6:49 pm

    I really like the whole set up of this poem, the intro and sense of an incomplete work, though the fragments themselves speak volumes on the subject of hands.

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  3. Sherry Blue Sky October 11, 2015 / 7:08 pm

    I love “Arriving, to the meaning of the matter.” Excellent!

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  4. Snakypoet (Rosemary Nissen-Wade) October 11, 2015 / 9:16 pm

    I love it! Everything about it.

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  5. Mary October 11, 2015 / 11:01 pm

    Week after week you link here, but don’t visit others! You would get many more visits (including mine) IF you would visit other people and not just drop links.

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  6. Grace October 12, 2015 / 12:00 am

    That is quite a puzzling riddle ~

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  7. Susan October 12, 2015 / 3:29 am

    Riddle me … parts of whole …very clever to put in the chocolate … or to put the chocolate in the hands.

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  8. kanzensakura October 12, 2015 / 3:37 am

    Quite a few times I have read your poems and commented and you have not returned the courtesy.

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  9. Jae Rose October 12, 2015 / 1:00 pm

    So many powerful images..like unwrapping a chocolate bar through the packaging..to the truth

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  10. glmeisner October 13, 2015 / 12:56 pm

    Interesting imagery, there is something powerful in the first section.

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  11. hypercryptical October 14, 2015 / 12:52 pm

    I love hands and imagining the stories they tell.
    Anna :o]

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