9 thoughts on “In the Jungle

  1. Grace May 16, 2016 / 9:28 pm

    I love the green smell of the jungle ~ I am envious of those green places, and wish someday to retire in one of them, away from the city smog ~


  2. lillian May 16, 2016 / 9:52 pm

    “leaves dripping with dew”…..and I smell and feel the want for green here!


  3. Victoria C. Slotto May 16, 2016 / 10:51 pm

    I like how you link the sense of small and memory in this one. I felt “jungle.”


  4. whimsygizmo May 16, 2016 / 11:10 pm

    Love this forage into the deep jungle. Gorgeous.


  5. Mish May 17, 2016 / 3:29 am

    Sounds like a wonderland of luscious green…


  6. katiemiafrederick May 17, 2016 / 4:57 am

    Eagles flY in
    rain forest
    as i
    oF uS
    iN skYes so
    blUe greeN
    brOwnoW iN
    oF MounTain
    AiR.. so FReED…:)


  7. banya sigh May 17, 2016 / 7:18 pm

    This is beautiful. I especially like this line (including the line break): “With thick morning mists. The”


  8. Rosemary Nissen-Wade May 18, 2016 / 8:24 am

    Nice repetitions; evocative.


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